Chapter 6 Questions

1. How would you revise the essay?· I revise my project number 1. Putting more information like why do I believe in it, why people believe in this, and how did it happen, how does this believe develop in life’s, what type of impact does it have, and what is the important thing about it. In audience, I make sure that the essay is clear and concise with the ideas and that it may be a topic that the reader would feel familiar with. Structure is the most important part in the essay, because everything has to go in the right place, at the right time, and with the right words. The development is kind of open and just gives you the idea straight up. And the voice is trying to open the eyes and give the reader an idea of what they have to be concern and open mind it about.2. Reread:· When I reread my essay I found some mistakes in the punctuation that when they weren’t there the text was kind of confusing.3. Quotes:· Yes it does. It makes me think that the person is actually talking and expressing himself in the text. And it’s helpful to understand the examples that are being expose in the text.I think quotes are one of the important things in a text, because when you have quotes you give life to the text, you show that someone is with you, or helps to express the moment more clearly.